Pitch reflection

 1) with the questions that I got asked from my audience was " how does this stand out from the other past adverts that twirl have made" this was a very frequent question asked and I think that my advert and print would stand out from the rest and what I answered is that I'm bringing a game that everyone is popular with into the advert will will allow people to focus on the game swell as chocolate.

2) Another question that I got asked was what would my slogan be because at the time I didn't have one but I had "terrifically twirly and scrumptiously swirly" in my head so I think id make that mu slogan as it rhymes and it will be remembered.

3) when i did my presentation I kept looking out of the door and not the audience which I need to work on because if I am presenting my attention should be on the audience making sure that they are engaged to what I ma saying and showing them as this will tell me if they like my idea or not.

4) The next time I present any type of work I will make sure I add less words so that it is me mainly talking instead of the audience needing to read more than listen to me because I feel like less words on powerpoint and more vocals is important to grab peoples attention.

5) Speaking louder and more clear is what I need to work on as well as trying to use the word "LIKE"as much as I did in the video because then it seems like I don't know what I'm saying and I'm not prepared.

6) some of the slides had too much information and text so what I should have done is made more slides and spread the information onto different slides and make sure that it doesn't look so crowded.

7) I should add more images instead of text so then when speaking I know I don't have to keep looking back to read what I wrote I can just look at the fixtures and allow myself to remember what it is that I needed to say.