Audience feedback

 Audience feedback questions:

1) did you find it easy to create this?

2) how have you met the brief to rebrand twirl?

3) would you add anything to the advert?

4) would you change anything and why?

5) how do you think your actors did in the advert?

Mayzi said that she understood and knew what was happening in the advert and that she could tell i was trying to advertise the cadbury chocolate. However she did suggest that there should be more communication and emotion being shown within the characters so that the audience can tell that they are having fun during this. To make sure this solution gets fixed i can try to record some clips again or crop it out and not have their face showing and replace it with upbeat music just so the audience know this is a fun game thst they are playing. Mayzi also said the way everything was laid out onto the tables and how the chocolates were clearly unwrapped allowing the camera to pick up its logo so the audience watching can see it’s twirl chocolate.

Jalilah said she understood the advert because of how the whole advert was mainly focused on twirl chocolate even at the beginning she liked how the small edits of it were made when i zoomed in and out. However she did say I could have made shorter clips for the less convenient clips in my advert because for the twirl close up I recorded it for a bit too long which was unnecessary , so what I can do to improve this would be to make the clips shorter on final cut pro so then its more efficient and the audience get to see the main part of the advert instead of the packaging.

Khairun said the same thing as mayzi and also did suggest that they show more emotion because she said she looked a little grumpy so what we can do is re do it and record it again and make sure everyone looks more happier.